The Sludge - Revision history

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 ===Principles===
-One step backwards and two steps forward. One most lose to achieve greater gains. One must sacrifice to prosper. The Sludge, while adamant to stay alive, does not crave its own growth, and lives to serve and teach mortals. While it eats memories, it does not consume anything that the mind derived from them, thus its followers eventually become great, empty-minded sages - masters of logic and quick thought, and ridiculously fast learners. It teaches determination, persistence - the joy of learning and the power of knowledge - the difference between the smart and the wise.
+One step backwards and two steps forward. One most lose to achieve greater gains. One must sacrifice to prosper. The Sludge, while adamant to stay alive, does not crave its own growth, and lives to serve and teach all lesser beings. While it eats memories, it does not consume anything that the mind derived from them, thus its followers eventually become great, empty-minded sages - masters of logic and quick thought, and ridiculously fast learners. It teaches determination, persistence - the joy of learning and the power of knowledge - the difference between the smart and the wise.
 ==Worship==

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 <div style="margin-top: 20px; text-align: center">{{RecipeDescription
 |verb              = Work
-|title             = Bring forth a poor servant of the About.
+|title             = Bring forth a poor servant of The About.
 |start_description = They stand there, looking at me, looking through me, taking every detail in as if it were a delicacy.
 |description       = These hollowed minds know nothing of the world or the Mansus, and yet their eyes tell a different story altogether...

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 |title             = Bring forth a poor servant of the About.
 |start_description = They stand there, looking at me, looking through me, taking every detail in as if it were a delicacy.
-|description       = These hollowed minds know nothing of the world or the Mansus, and yet their eyes tell a different story.
+|description       = These hollowed minds know nothing of the world or the Mansus, and yet their eyes tell a different story altogether...
 |aspect0           = Ritual
 |aspect1           = Knock

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 |title             = Bring forth a poor servant of the About.
 |start_description = They stand there, looking at me, looking through me, taking every detail in as if it were a delicacy.
-|description       = WIP
+|description       = These hollowed minds know nothing of the world or the Mansus, and yet their eyes tell a different story.
 |aspect0           = Ritual
 |aspect1           = Knock

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 ===Servants===
 ====Names====
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+====The Blank====
 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription
 |image       = File:Blank.png

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 ===Appearance===
-A large lake of shifting goo of an extremely dark green color. This is the Sludge's base form. With enough knowledge, it takes on solid forms of varying complexity and size. Its previous prime form was that of a massive turtle (it prefers beings with long lifespans).
+A large lake of shifting goo of an extremely dark green color. This is the Sludge's base form. With enough knowledge, it takes on solid forms of varying complexity and size. Its previous prime form was that of a massive turtle (it prefers the likeness of beings with long lifespans).
 ===Principles===
 One step backwards and to steps forwards. You must lose to gain more. You must sacrifice to prosper. The Sludge, while adamant to stay alive, does not crave its own growth, and lives to serve and teach mortals. While it eats memories, it does not consume anything that the mind derives from them. Its followers eventually become great empty-minded sages - masters of logic and quick thought, and ridiculously fast learners. It teaches determination, persistence - the joy of learning and the power of knowledge - the difference between the smart and the wise.