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Nephilim: /* The Fansus */

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‎The Fansus

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‎Description

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‎Description

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 == Locations ==
 === The Fansus ===
 ===The Histories===

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 | title = The Serpent Submitting
 | card = File:SubbyCard.jpeg
-| quote = We call upon the Wishmaster, who is untocuhable / who is infallible / who cannot deny
+| quote = We call upon the Wishmaster, who is untouchable / who is infallible / who cannot deny
 | origin = From-Flesh
 | titles =  The Servant Infallible, Wishmaster, The Starry-Eyed
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 He was born when the Great Serpent plucked a jester from the Histories to serve him, and he became a Name - Then, when freed from his chains, an Hour.
 === Appearance ===
-A Hognose snake, with the scales of a Californian Ringneck. On its sides are a chain of cartoony eye-patterns that sometimes appear to move and stare at you. It always wears a jingly jester hat.
+A purple-scaled Hognose snake, with the scale-patterns of a Californian Ringneck, and others on his face resembling a clown's makeup, in various shades of bright pinks and oranges. On its sides are a chain of lime-green eyes which watch over all of Starwell, and a glimmering multicoloured third eye on his forehead. It always wears a jingly jester hat.
 === Principles ===
 Laughter. Servitude. Obedience.

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 | title = The Serpent Submitting
 | card = File:SubbyCard.jpeg
-| quote = "We call upon the Wishmaster, who is
+| quote = We call upon the Wishmaster, who is untocuhable / who is infallible / who cannot deny
 | origin = From-Flesh
 | titles =  The Servant Infallible, Wishmaster, The Starry-Eyed

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 | title = The Serpent Submitting
 | card = File:SubbyCard.jpeg
 | origin = From-Flesh
 | titles =  The Servant Infallible, Wishmaster, The Starry-Eyed

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 {{InfoboxHour
 | title = The Serpent Submitting
-| card =
+| card = File:SubbyCard.jpeg
 | origin = From-Flesh
 | titles =  The Servant Infallible, Wishmaster, The Starry-Eyed

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 | origin = From-Flesh
 | titles =  The Servant Infallible, Wishmaster, The Starry-Eyed
-| names = [Soon.]
+| names =  The Harletwins
 | aspects = {{Aspect|Grail}} {{Aspect|Knock}} {{Aspect|Heart}}
-| arrival = [Soon.]
+| arrival = Achieved Hourhood when the GS left, but was a Name long before that.
 | owners = [[User:Nephilim|a horse with a knife]]
 }}

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 The Serpent Submitting is the Great Serpent's jester - Born to serve, and nothing else. Since his master has left, he will not deny orders from anyone who commands him. A double-edged sword to anybody willing to use him.
 He can never say the word No.
 === Appearance ===
 A Hognose snake, with the scales of a Californian Ringneck. On its sides are a chain of cartoony eye-patterns that sometimes appear to move and stare at you. It always wears a jingly jester hat.

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 == Description ==
+The Serpent Submitting is the Great Serpent's jester - Born to serve, and nothing else. Since his master has left, he will not deny orders from anyone who commands him. A double-edged sword to anybody willing to use him.
 === Appearance ===
-A Hognose snake, with the scales of a Californian Ringneck. On its sides are a chain of eye-patterns that sometimes appear to move and stare at you. It always wears a jingly jester hat.
+A Hognose snake, with the scales of a Californian Ringneck. On its sides are a chain of cartoony eye-patterns that sometimes appear to move and stare at you. It always wears a jingly jester hat.
 [WIP. Soon.]
 === Principles ===
 ==Worship==