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Zolgo3: /* Long & Children */

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‎Long & Children

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 | owners  = [[User:Zolgo3|Beast]]
 }}
 '''The Nizvestier Within''', also referred to as '''The Mirror’s Maw''', '''The Well-Of-Whips''' and  '''The Bleak Spiral''', is an Hour from [[The Fourth Fansus|the Fourth Fansus’]] [[:Category:The House of the Wyrm|House of the Wyrm]], created by [[User:Zolgo3|Beast]]. It is a [[:Category:Gods-From-Nowhere|God-From-Nowhere]] and the second [[:Category:Gods-From-Greif|God-From-Greif]], born shortly after the [[The Transfinite Question|Transfinite Question]] from the self doubt, blame and loathing of a mournful [[The Old Wyrm|Old Wyrm]], which had been left to mingle with the Sea-of-Regrets. Its primary aspects are [[:Category:Winter|Winter]] and [[:Category:Winter|Lantern]], with secondary aspects of [[:Category:Lantern|Edge]] and a tertiary aspect of [[:Category:Grail|Grail]]. It seeks nothing and wishes only to be left alone. <br>

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 ==Servants==
 ====<big><big><big>Long & Children</big></big></big>====
-=====Sirens (wip name)=====
+=====Sirens=====
 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription
 |image       = File:TheOldGeezer.png
-|title       = Siren
+|title       = A Siren
 |description = wip
 |aspect0     = Follower
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 <div style="margin-top: 20px; text-align: center">{{RecipeDescription
 |verb              = Work
-|title             = Summon a lonely and addicting creature of the Well.
+|title             = Summon a lonely and clinging creature of the Well.
 |start_description = wip
 |description       = wip

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 }}</div>
-=====The Iced Angler=====
+=====Gan, The Iced Angler=====
 '"wip"''<br />
 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription

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 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription
 |image       = File:TheOldGeezer.png
-|title       = The Iced Angler
+|title       = Gan, The Iced Angler
 |description = '"wip"'
 |aspect0     = Follower

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 ====<big><big><big>Names</big></big></big>====
-=====The FNORD=====
+=====Marie, The Spotlight Pen=====
 '"wip"''<br />
 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription

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 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription
 |image       = File:TheOldGeezer.png
-|title       = The FNORD
+|title       = Marie, The Spotlight Pen
 |description = '"FNORD"'
 |aspect0     = Follower

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 *** Aspects: {{Aspect|Grail|5}} {{Aspect|Moth|3}} {{Aspect|Intoxicating}}
 ** A Honeyed Pail (Half)
-*** Aspects: {{Aspect|Grail|4}} {{Aspect|Moth|4}} {{Aspect|Container}}
+*** Aspects: {{Aspect|Grail|4}} {{Aspect|Moth|4}}
 ** A Honeyed Pail (Empty)
 *** Aspects: {{Aspect|Grail|3}} {{Aspect|Moth|5}} {{Aspect|OutOfPlace}}

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 * The Iced Angler
 * The FNORD
-| aspects = {{Aspect|Edge}} {{Aspect|Winter}} {{Aspect|Lantern}} {{Aspect|Grail}}
+| aspects = {{Aspect|Winter}} {{Aspect|Lantern}} {{Aspect|Edge}} {{Aspect|Grail}}
 | arrival = FNORD
 | owners  = [[User:Zolgo3|Beast]]
 }}
-'''The Nizvestier Within''', also referred to as '''The Mirror’s Maw''', '''The Well-Of-Whips''' and  '''The Bleak Spiral''', is an Hour from [[The Fourth Fansus|the Fourth Fansus’]] [[:Category:The House of the Wyrm|House of the Wyrm]], created by [[User:Zolgo3|Beast]]. It is a [[:Category:Gods-From-Nowhere|God-From-Nowhere]] and the second [[:Category:Gods-From-Greif|God-From-Greif]], born shortly after the [[The Transfinite Question|Transfinite Question]] from the self doubt, blame and loathing of a mournful [[The Old Wyrm|Old Wyrm]], which had been left to mingle with the Sea-of-Regrets. Its primary aspects are [[:Category:Winter|Edge]] and [[:Category:Winter|Winter]], with secondary aspects of [[:Category:Lantern|Lantern]] and a tertiary aspect of [[:Category:Grail|Grail]]. It seeks nothing. It wishes only to be left alone. <br>
+'''The Nizvestier Within''', also referred to as '''The Mirror’s Maw''', '''The Well-Of-Whips''' and  '''The Bleak Spiral''', is an Hour from [[The Fourth Fansus|the Fourth Fansus’]] [[:Category:The House of the Wyrm|House of the Wyrm]], created by [[User:Zolgo3|Beast]]. It is a [[:Category:Gods-From-Nowhere|God-From-Nowhere]] and the second [[:Category:Gods-From-Greif|God-From-Greif]], born shortly after the [[The Transfinite Question|Transfinite Question]] from the self doubt, blame and loathing of a mournful [[The Old Wyrm|Old Wyrm]], which had been left to mingle with the Sea-of-Regrets. Its primary aspects are [[:Category:Winter|Winter]] and [[:Category:Winter|Lantern]], with secondary aspects of [[:Category:Lantern|Edge]] and a tertiary aspect of [[:Category:Grail|Grail]]. It seeks nothing and wishes only to be left alone. <br>
-It never will be.<br>
+Its tarot varies from deck to deck. It is most commonly associated with Judgment, the Hanged-Man, or the Devil, in descending frequency.
 ==Description=
 ===History===
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-The young and innocent seeking the Mirror’s Maw can be forgiven for missing it the first time they reach its chamber. For mortals, the amount of the Maw they can see and access is highly dependent on both the poorness of their life choices and their self awareness; the depth of the whirlpool
+The young and innocent seeking the Mirror’s Maw can be forgiven for missing it the first time they reach its chamber. For mortals, the amount of the Maw they can see and access is highly dependent on how poor their choices in the wake have been and how aware they are of said mistakes; the whirlpool seeming to take form as they fall deeper and deeper into a downward spiral. Those who’ve achieved immortality can see the Maw in its entirety, with layers inaccessible to them locked behind a screen of water, giving the Maw an appearance that resembles a loop of reflected mirrors.  <br>
-Despite no formations existing beneath the sea of mists, numerous ledges of slippery, jagged ivory line the steeper parts of its maw, though they grow less and less structurally sound as one descends. Salt crystals and icicles grow beneath these rocks, scattering the light of the cave further down.<br>
+Despite no land existing beneath the sea of regrets, numerous ledges of slippery, jagged ivory line the steeper parts of its maw, growing less and less structurally sound as one descends. Salt crystals and icicles grow beneath these rocks, scattering the light of the cave further down.<br>
-Those who reach through the rushing water once they pass its lips find themselves hooked to razor sharp barbs, which inflict pain and disfigurement onto one’s dream form. As one descends, these hooks grow longer, and inflict greater and longer lasting mutations, eventually forever deforming your dream self to match the hideousness of your deeds. Desperate souls who’ve gone too deep will use these hooks to climb their way back out. Those who do so and are fully touched by the light, however, will find that these hooks can fully retract themselves. The same is true for the narrow 'stairs' seemingly built into the Well’s side.<br>
+Those who reach through the rushing water once they pass its lips find themselves hooked to razor sharp barbs, which inflict pain and disfigurement onto the dreamer's form. As one descends, these hooks grow longer and thicker, inflicting greater pains and longer lasting deformations, up to the point eventually forever warping ones dream self to to some personally symbolic reflection of their deeds. Desperate souls who’ve gone too deep will use these hooks to climb their way back out. Those who do so and are fully touched by the light, however, will find that these hooks can retract without warning. The same is true for the narrow 'stairs' seemingly built into the Well’s side.<br>
 Objects and representations of desires and impulses flow up from its mouth, effortlessly moving against the raging current. They are not to be taken.<br>
 ===Principles===
 Winter, for the constant certainty of its endings, as well as the peace of it promises for those who leap for them. <br>
-Lantern, for the self scrutiny it brings and the revealing of flaws, as well as the mercilessness of its pull.<br>
+Lantern, for the self scrutiny it brings and the revealing of flaws.
-Grail, for the temptations addicting, decadent and wrathful that draw the restless to act. <br>
+Edge, for the strangling ruin and dread it brings.<br>
-Though not of Forge, the Nizvestier Within does encourage change. Confidence is the that turns improvement away; the arrogance by which one remains ignorance to their own faults. In order to grow, it must be torn down. It will provide no additional strength or willpower help make this change, but its nature ensures the Nizvestier will provide threats to motivate the inactive, weather or not it wishes to.
+Though not of Forge, the Nizvestier Within does encourage change. Confidence is the that turns improvement away; the arrogance by which one remains ignorance to their own faults. In order to grow, it must be torn down. It will provide no additional strength or willpower help make this change, but will provide threats to motivate the inactive.
 ==Worship==
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 ** Aspects: {{Aspect|Winter|5}} {{Aspect|Edge|3}}
 * A Honeyed Pail
-** Aspects: {{Aspect|Grail|5}} {{Aspect|Moth|3}}
+** A Honeyed Pail (Full)
 * A Black Eye
-** Aspects: {{Aspect|Lantern|10}} {{Aspect|Winter|2}} {{Aspect|MirrorAspect}}
+** A Black Eye (Full)
 ===Ingredients===
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 ** Aspect: {{Aspect|Winter|15}}
 ===Books===
-* The Zeroth Indictment (Indictments correspond to hour number. Everyone gets one but you can have more books than just that)
+* The Twenty-First Indictment:
 ** Description: It's an old book, okay? A dusty old tome? Made out of...flesh? What the.
 ** Start Text: This is the tale of the skeleton warriors.
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 ==Secrets==
 [[Category:Hours (Vol. III)]]