The Mare-Night - Revision history

Nephilim: /* Principles */

2021-04-22T14:46:13Z

‎Principles

Nephilim: /* Base/body */

2021-04-22T14:45:30Z

‎Base/body

Nephilim: /* Tristan, The Saint Missing */

2019-10-10T22:57:50Z

‎Tristan, The Saint Missing

Nephilim: /* [Name Pending] */

2019-10-10T22:27:24Z

‎[Name Pending]

Nephilim: /* Mabel, The Wordweaver */

2019-10-10T22:26:19Z

‎Mabel, The Wordweaver

Nephilim: /* Valerius, Scourge Promised */

2019-10-10T22:25:46Z

‎Valerius, Scourge Promised

Nephilim at 22:25, 10 October 2019

2019-10-10T22:25:25Z

Nephilim: /* Mabel, The Wordweaver */

2019-10-10T22:02:23Z

‎Mabel, The Wordweaver

Nephilim: /* Mabel, The Fox */

2019-10-10T22:01:37Z

‎Mabel, The Fox

Nephilim: /* Mabel, The Fox */

2019-10-10T20:34:48Z

‎Mabel, The Fox

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 The Mare is, as previously mentioned, an incarnation of murder born from the crimes of Man. Despite her (usually) approachable personality, she is still an extremely violent Hour of delightful sacrifice.
-She is the Hour of '''Murder, Hunting and Unexpected Endings'''
+She is the Hour of '''Murder, Hunting and Unexpected Endings'''. She is also, by extension, unofficially treated as an Hour of war.
 == Worship ==

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 *Her skin is dark brown as fertile mud, with freckles and spots in silver, bronze and moss. Her claws are long, thin and straight, sharp like Alastor's needles.
 *Despite looking mostly feminine, she either manifests as both (physical) sexes at once, or none.
 *Her coat is spotted and dappled as her skin, and her fur grey as steel. Said fur is short and smooth, and doesn't stick out much around her hooves.
 *The Mare's hair is colourful as half-tarnished copper. Messy, somewhat wavy, and grows all the way from her scalp to her upper back, like a mane. It is usually adorned with a variety of flowers.

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 ==== Tristan, The Saint Missing ====
-[Old Description] - An once-mortal, now under the servitude of the Mare. A particularly sadistic executioner of the old times, with a particular penchant for cannibalism and starvation. Deeply religious, he would starve heretics by feeding them only their own flesh and blood- And would feast on his own skin when he dared to stray from his path. Inquestionably insane, questionably effective. But the Mare holds his leash with pride anyway. {{Aspect|Grail|12}} {{Aspect|Moth|7}}
+<div style="margin-top: 20px; text-align: center">{{RecipeDescription
+|verb              = Work
-He is described as a very pale, famished, almost-white young man with an empty amber stare of madness, covered in self-inflicted scars. There's not a hair on his body aside from his eyebrows and hair (which is long, straight and red). He has remarkably long fangs. He rides on a freakishly tall, famished Arabian stallion, whose bones can be seen through the skin. Its hair is white and patchy, and its eyes share the same maddening empty stare of its rider.
+|title             = Summon a strange Name of the Arrowsong
 ==== Mabel, The Starspeech  ====

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 }}</div>
-==== [Name Pending] ====
+==== Tristan, The Saint Missing ====
 [Old Description] - An once-mortal, now under the servitude of the Mare. A particularly sadistic executioner of the old times, with a particular penchant for cannibalism and starvation. Deeply religious, he would starve heretics by feeding them only their own flesh and blood- And would feast on his own skin when he dared to stray from his path. Inquestionably insane, questionably effective. But the Mare holds his leash with pride anyway. {{Aspect|Grail|12}} {{Aspect|Moth|7}}

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 He is described as a very pale, famished, almost-white young man with an empty amber stare of madness, covered in self-inflicted scars. There's not a hair on his body aside from his eyebrows and hair (which is long, straight and red). He has remarkably long fangs. He rides on a freakishly tall, famished Arabian stallion, whose bones can be seen through the skin. Its hair is white and patchy, and its eyes share the same maddening empty stare of its rider.
-==== Mabel, The Wordweaver  ====
+==== Mabel, The Starspeech  ====
 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription
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 |verb              = Work
 |title               = Summon a mysterious Half-Name-Emanation of the Mare-Night
-|start_description = Not quite a person, not quite a Name. The Wordweaver's mind-breaking charms could be attracted to me with the right amount of enlightenment, and some promise of pleasures...
+|start_description = Not quite a person, not quite a Name. The Starspeech's mind-breaking charms could be attracted to me with the right amount of enlightenment, and some promise of pleasures...
 |description       = Mabel needs no words to exert her influence. Only a confident smile. She pushes a curly bang away from her eye and poses for me. The white qilin with her looks at me with curiosity. For a second, i thought i caught a glimpse of a bushy tail under her skirt.
 |aspect0           = Ritual

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 |aspect4     = Edge
 |quantity4   = 12
-|aspect5     = Moth
+|aspect5     = Forge
 |quantity5   = 12
 |fansus      = 3

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 | titles = Crownslayer, Arrowsong, Hunter's Moon
 | names =
-*Mabel, The Fox {{Aspect|Lantern}}  {{Aspect|Knock}}
+*Mabel, The Starspeech {{Aspect|Lantern}}  {{Aspect|Knock}}
 *Alastor, The Blight-Father {{Aspect|Knock}} {{Aspect|Winter}}
-*Valerius, Scourge Promised {{Aspect|Edge}} {{Aspect|Moth}}
+*Valerius, Scourge Promised {{Aspect|Edge}} {{Aspect|Forge}}
-*Vladimir, The Flagellant {{Aspect|Grail}} {{Aspect|Moth}}
+*Tristan, The Saint Missing {{Aspect|Grail}} {{Aspect|Winter}}
 *Justine, Saturnian {{Aspect|Edge}} {{Aspect|Winter}}
 | aspects = {{Aspect|Edge}} {{Aspect|Moth}} {{Aspect|Winter}}
 | owners = [[user:Nephilim|Иephilim]]
 }}
 The '''Mare-Night''' is an Edge - Moth - Winter Hour created by Nephilim. The Mare presides over acts of slaughter and violence by the hand of Man and Beast- timeless act of '''murder'''. An artificial form of ending. She is considered a patron of assassins, hunters and mercenaries. She is known to be kind yet merciless.

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 |quantity3         = 2
 |fansus            = 3
+}}</div>
 <small><small>...Yes, they do have detachable heads. All of them.</small></small>

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 He is described as a very pale, famished, almost-white young man with an empty amber stare of madness, covered in self-inflicted scars. There's not a hair on his body aside from his eyebrows and hair (which is long, straight and red). He has remarkably long fangs. He rides on a freakishly tall, famished Arabian stallion, whose bones can be seen through the skin. Its hair is white and patchy, and its eyes share the same maddening empty stare of its rider.
-==== Mabel, The Fox ====
+==== Mabel, The Wordweaver  ====
 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription
 |image       =
 |title       = Mabel
-|description = '[X] '
+|description = 'I've conquered hundreds like you... Do you want to be next?'
 |aspect0     = Follower
 |aspect1     = Summoned
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 <div style="margin-top: 20px; text-align: center">{{RecipeDescription
 |verb              = Work
-|title               = [x]
+|title               = Summon a mysterious Half-Name-Emanation of the Mare-Night
-|start_description = [×]
+|start_description = Not quite a person, not quite a Name. The Wordweaver's mind-breaking charms could be attracted to me with the right amount of enlightenment, and some promise of pleasures...
-|description      = [×]
+|description       = Mabel needs no words to exert her influence. Only a confident smile. She pushes a curly bang away from her eye and poses for me. The white qilin with her looks at me with curiosity. For a second, i thought i caught a glimpse of a bushy tail under her skirt.
 |aspect0           = Ritual
 |aspect1           = Grail
 |quantity1         = 5
-|aspect2           = Winter
+|aspect2           = Lantern
 |quantity2         = 10
 |aspect3           = Knock
 |quantity3         = 2
 |fansus            = 3
 <small><small>...Yes, they do have detachable heads. All of them.</small></small>

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 ==== Mabel, The Fox ====
-[Old Description] - An once-mortal, now under the servitude of the Mare. A so-called "Assassin" who has never had to kill a soul. Instead, her silver tongue conquers the mind of all those who stand in her way, and find no more appealing choice than to follow her into enlightenment, vanishing, "dead" into her servitude. Those who fall into her traps are never heard from again, surrendering their lives as cultists. Of course, she could shatter your psyche if she wanted. She just prefers to have you in on her cause. {{Aspect|Lantern|12}} {{Aspect|Knock|9}}
+<div style="margin-top: 20px; text-align: center">{{RecipeDescription
 She is described as a strikingly beautiful pale young woman, with short, curly black-grey ombre "dyed" hair and piercing yellow eyes. She always dresses exclusively in shades of grey. Some say they have seen a glimpse of a bushy tail under her pencil-skirt. She rides on a white qilin with cloven hooves and gemstone-scales, adorned with exotic feathers on its bridle and many banners embroidered with symbols of the Mare.