The Half-Turned - Revision history

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 |image       = File:TheOldGeezer.png
 |title       = A Featureless Flock
-|description=  Gliding beats part the sea. Swaying caresses ripple the sky. The earth below echos with a swishing, flapping murmur. Here, the whispers of figures never renowned. There, the rumors of deeds never done. When the writhing haze passes, nothing is quite as was.
+|description=  Gliding beats part the sea. Swaying caresses ripple the sky. The mass echos with a swishing, flapping murmur. Here, the whispers of figures never once renown. There, the rumors of deeds never seen nor done. When the writhing haze passes, nothing will be quite as was.
 |aspect0     = Follower
 |aspect1     = Summoned

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 |image       = File:TheOldGeezer.png
 |title       = A Featureless Flock
-|description=  Gliding beats part the sea. Swaying caresses ripple the sky. All through the earth can one hear the murmuring swishes and flaps. Here, the whispers of those we’ve never known. There, the rumors of deeds we’ve never done. When the writhing haze passes, nothing is quite as was.
+|description=  Gliding beats part the sea. Swaying caresses ripple the sky. The earth below echos with a swishing, flapping murmur. Here, the whispers of figures never renowned. There, the rumors of deeds never done. When the writhing haze passes, nothing is quite as was.
 |aspect0     = Follower
 |aspect1     = Summoned

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 |image       = File:TheOldGeezer.png
 |title       = A Featureless Flock
-|description=  Gliding beats part the sea. Swaying caresses ripple the sky. All through the earth are the murmuring swishes and flaps. Here, the whispers of those we’ve never known. There, the rumors of deeds we’ve never done. When the writhing haze passes, nothing is quite as was.
+|description=  Gliding beats part the sea. Swaying caresses ripple the sky. All through the earth can one hear the murmuring swishes and flaps. Here, the whispers of those we’ve never known. There, the rumors of deeds we’ve never done. When the writhing haze passes, nothing is quite as was.
 |aspect0     = Follower
 |aspect1     = Summoned

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 |image       = File:TheOldGeezer.png
 |title       = A Featureless Flock
-|description= Masses flap and spin to a constant beat. Movements part the sea. Swaying caresses ripple the sky. Here, the whispers of those we’ve never known. There, the rumors of deeds we’ve never done. When the haze passes, nothing is quite as was.
+|description=  Gliding beats part the sea. Swaying caresses ripple the sky. All through the earth are the murmuring swishes and flaps. Here, the whispers of those we’ve never known. There, the rumors of deeds we’ve never done. When the writhing haze passes, nothing is quite as was.
 |aspect0     = Follower
 |aspect1     = Summoned

@@ Line 53: / Line 53: @@
 |image       = File:TheOldGeezer.png
 |title       = A Featureless Flock
-|description= Masses flap and spin to a constant beat.
+|description= Masses flap and spin to a constant beat. Movements part the sea. Swaying caresses ripple the sky. Here, the whispers of those we’ve never known. There, the rumors of deeds we’ve never done. When the haze passes, nothing is quite as was.
 |aspect0     = Follower
 |aspect1     = Summoned

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	Here, the whispers of those we’ve never known.		Here, the whispers of those we’ve never known.
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	There, the rumors of deeds we’ve never done.		There, the rumors of deeds we’ve never done.