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 | titles = His majesty the Fistborn, first among the hours, the beautiful, Apollon, etc
 | names = The hundred-winged, the Secondborn
-| aspects = Grail and Edge
+| aspects = Grail, Edge, Moth and Knock
 | owners = Gwreet
 | date of arrival = classical era

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 {{InfoboxHour
 | title = The Firstborn
-| card = the Lovers
+| card = File:ARES.png
 | quote = The firstborn claims to be the first among hours, and whilst this is certainly not true,he has the power to wage war on those who contradict his vanity.
 | origin = from flesh

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 {{InfoboxHour
-| [[File:ARES.png|thumb]]
+[[File:ARES.png|thumb]]
 | title = The Firstborn
 | card = the Lovers

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 {{InfoboxHour
 | title = The Firstborn
 | card = the Lovers
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 }}
-[[File:ARES.png|thumb]]
 == Appearance ==
 The firstborn appears as an almost irritatingly beautiful man in greek armor, but he is also known to appear as a firefly when he brings the new day.

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 == Appearance ==
 The firstborn appears as an almost irritatingly beautiful man in greek armor, but he is also known to appear as a firefly when he brings the new day.

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 == History ==
 The Firstborn is said to have originated from a small village in Phrygia, albeit it’s name has been forgotten by the histories, as was his original  name. Beloved by all, men, women  and even the creatures of the Mansus, he rapidly developed a highly narcissistic and dismissive personality, which ultimately proved to be his undoing: after being harshly turned down, a forest-seer laid a curse on him, that he „never shall leave his house, lest he die.“ Infuriated, he ran  after the seer, but as soon as he set foot on the doorsteps, he felt himself weakening.
-Using his beauty as a bargaining chip, he slowly built up a cult, seeking ascension into the Mansus, because if he can't leave his house, he shall move to a bigger one. As the years passed by, he built up a cult, amassed a great hoard of treasures, incited strife between the hours, and directed his cultists in the flaying of Marsyas, the forest-seer who had cursed him. As the time had come and the hours were infighting more than ever, he seized his window of opportunity and ascended through the Sea Gate, in an monumental orgy in which he ultimately betrayed all his lovers, reciting the Formulae Voluptuous over and over.
+Using his beauty as a bargaining chip, he slowly built up a cult, seeking ascension into the Mansus, because if he can't leave his house, he shall move to a bigger one. As the years passed by, he built up a cult, amassed a great hoard of treasures, incited strife between the hours, and directed his cultists in the flaying of Marsyas, the forest-seer who had cursed him. As the time had come and the hours were infighting more than ever, he seized his window of opportunity and ascended through the Sea Gate, in an monumental orgy in which he ultimately betrayed all his lovers, reciting the Formulae Excessive over and over.
 He is a hot-headed hour, easily tricked into a fight, which he however will probably win. He both fights and loves with great passion, but most of all he loves himself. Sometimes, he is known to act erratically, but no affiliation with moth was ever proven.
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 # '''Temptation: Beauty: I have been informed that I hold the key to unearthly beauty.
 # '''Dedication: Beauty: I have decided to pursue unearthly beauty by all means.
-# '''Ascension: The skin‘s mark: I have scarred my skin with repetitions of the Formulae Voluptuous, to remember the Betrayed's sacrifice.
+# '''Ascension: The skin‘s mark: I have scarred my skin with repetitions of the Formulae Excessive, to remember the Betrayed's sacrifice.
 # '''Ascension: The hairs‘s mark: I have shaven my hair and set it aflame, to remember the Betrayed's torment.
 # '''Ascension: The mouth‘s mark: I have sewn my lips together, to remember the Betrayed's acceptance.
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 After the Study: The description itself is not much more than a traumatized man's stuttering, but he seems to remember the words that were spoken quite well.
-Yields: Formulae Voluptuous (Grail 10 lore), the Rite of betrayal, dread
+Yields: Formulae Excessive (Grail 10 lore), the Rite of betrayal, dread
 On the Firstborn

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	[[Category:Hours (Vol. III)]]		[[Category:Hours (Vol. III)]]
		+	[[Category:Gods-From-Flesh (Vol. III)]]
		+	[[Category:Edge (Vol. III)]]
		+	[[Category:Grail (Vol. III)]]

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 | title = The Firstborn
 | card = the Lovers
-| quote = „The firstborn claims to be the first among hours, and whilst this is certainly not true,he has the power to wage war on those who contradict his vanity.“ - Anaximenes, e hora
+| quote = The firstborn claims to be the first among hours, and whilst this is certainly not true,he has the power to wage war on those who contradict his vanity.
 | origin = from flesh
 | titles = His majesty the Fistborn, first among the hours, the beautiful, Apollon, etc
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 === The Fansus ===
-To this day, he still resides at and presides over the Sea Gate, where he built his fortress of unchartered pleasures.
+To this day, he still resides at and presides over the Sea Gate, where he built his fortress of unchartered pleasures, the Red Keep.
 === The Histories ===