The Cuckoo - Revision history

Edward at 15:03, 24 July 2018

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Text replacement - "$" to "Category:Fansus I"

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‎The Fansus

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‎The Fansus

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‎Relationships

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-}}'''The Spark''' ('''The Crone''', '''The Old Shame''', '''The Deceitful One''') is the Fifteenth Hour of the Fansus, created by [[User:Edward|Edward]]. She is a God-From-Flesh, created by [[the Maker]] in the [[Sixth History]]. Her aspects are [[Grail]] and [[Winter]] in decreasing order of importance.
+}}'''The Crone''', also known as '''The Old Shame''' or '''The Deceitful One''' is the Fifteenth Hour of the Fansus, created by [[User:Edward|Edward]]. She is a God-From-Flesh, created by [[the Maker]] in the [[Sixth History]]. Her aspects are [[Grail]] and [[Winter]] in decreasing order of importance.
 From the earliest days of the Sixth History, the Hours of the Forge were deeply invested in the development of the humans they created. The Hour of the Maker took particular interest in the fledgling race, constantly adjusting their biology and gathering the most exceptional among their number for “special improvement”, creating some of the Histories’ first Long.

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 [[Category:Gods-From-Flesh]]
 [[Category:Grail]]
-[[Category:Winter]]
+[[Category:Winter]][[Category:Fansus I]]

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 == Locations ==
 === The Fansus ===
-* [[The Cuckoo’s Nest]]: The Cuckoo’s Nest rests in the shadow of a great Wood tree. It once rested high above the forest floor, but it grew too heavy to be supported by the branches and crashed to earth long ago. To what Hour did this place belong before the Crone took up her roost here? The Silver Owl? Some long dead aviform Hour? It is as if the Crone has stolen for herself all memory of its origin. Whatever it looked like, it’s surely unrecognizable now. Half birdnest, half trash heap, the branches of the trees are covered in strewn garments and tattered finery.
+* [[The Sunken Place]]: The Cuckoo’s Nest rests in the shadow of a great Wood tree. It once rested high above the forest floor, but it grew too heavy to be supported by the branches and crashed to earth long ago. To what Hour did this place belong before the Crone took up her roost here? The Silver Owl? Some long dead aviform Hour? It is as if the Crone has stolen for herself all memory of its origin. Whatever it looked like, it’s surely unrecognizable now. Half birdnest, half trash heap, the branches of the trees are covered in strewn garments and tattered finery.
 === The Histories ===

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-}}'''The Spark''' ('''The Crone''', '''The Old Shame''', '''The Deceitful One''') is the Eighteenth Hour of the Fansus, created by [[User:Edward|Edward]]. She is a God-From-Flesh, created by [[the Maker]] in the [[Sixth History]]. Her aspects are [[Grail]] and [[Winter]] in decreasing order of importance.
+}}'''The Spark''' ('''The Crone''', '''The Old Shame''', '''The Deceitful One''') is the Fifteenth Hour of the Fansus, created by [[User:Edward|Edward]]. She is a God-From-Flesh, created by [[the Maker]] in the [[Sixth History]]. Her aspects are [[Grail]] and [[Winter]] in decreasing order of importance.
 From the earliest days of the Sixth History, the Hours of the Forge were deeply invested in the development of the humans they created. The Hour of the Maker took particular interest in the fledgling race, constantly adjusting their biology and gathering the most exceptional among their number for “special improvement”, creating some of the Histories’ first Long.

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 == Locations ==
 === The Fansus ===
-'''The Cuckoo’s Nest:''' The Cuckoo’s Nest rests in the shadow of a great Wood tree. It once rested high above the forest floor, but it grew too heavy to be supported by the branches and crashed to earth long ago. To what Hour did this place belong before the Crone took up her roost here? The Silver Owl? Some long dead aviform Hour? It is as if the Crone has stolen for herself all memory of its origin. Whatever it looked like, it’s surely unrecognizable now. Half birdnest, half trash heap, the branches of the trees are covered in strewn garments and tattered finery.
+* [[The Cuckoo’s Nest]]: The Cuckoo’s Nest rests in the shadow of a great Wood tree. It once rested high above the forest floor, but it grew too heavy to be supported by the branches and crashed to earth long ago. To what Hour did this place belong before the Crone took up her roost here? The Silver Owl? Some long dead aviform Hour? It is as if the Crone has stolen for herself all memory of its origin. Whatever it looked like, it’s surely unrecognizable now. Half birdnest, half trash heap, the branches of the trees are covered in strewn garments and tattered finery.
 === The Histories ===

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 * [[The Anvil]]:
 * [[The Maker]]:
-* [[The Deciever]]:
+* [[The Deceiver]]:
 * [[The Huntsman]]:
 * [[The Great Serpent]]:

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 * [[The Watcher in the Window]]:
 * [[The Elder Sister]]:
-* [[The Apple-of-the-Eye]]: The Cuckoo keeps stealing the Apple’s stuff to make broken, destructive Hours! The Glorious lie considers her to be a troublesome enemy, and one that looks like a beggar.
+* [[The Apple-of-the-Eye]]: The Cuckoo keeps stealing the Apple’s stuff to make broken, destructive Hours! The Glorious Lie considers her to be a troublesome enemy, and one that looks like a beggar.
 * [[SWOUP]]:
 * [[The Archivist]]:

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 * [[The Bright-Delver]]:
 * [[The Harvester]]:
-* [[<nowiki>[ ]</nowiki>]]:
+* [[Blank|<nowiki>[&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;]</nowiki>]]:
 * [[The Insidious]]:
 * [[The Snow-Stained]]:

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 * [[Snake Tail with Appendages]]:
 * [[The Engine of Cycles]]:
-* [[The Peacock]]:
+* [[The Peacock]]: The Peacock's "mother".
 * [[Old Tarnished]]:
 * [[The Spark]]:

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 == Relationships ==
 * [[The Architeuthian]]:
-* [[The Anaconda]]:
+* [[The Anaconda]]: The Cuckoo's nest fell from a broken branch and sunk into the mire beneath. No one witnessed the cause, no one was there to say that any hour at all might have done such a thing. The fact that this event put the Cuckoo in a prison of her own devising surely indicates that it was her own fault, right? The Anaconda may dislike the Cuckoo, and often chide or thwart that Hour, but certainly no one could ever find proof that it had struck against the Cuckoo.
 * [[Snake Tail with Appendages]]:
 * [[The Engine of Cycles]]: