The Bright-Delver - Revision history

Anaconda With Sword: fixing bad writing

2019-06-05T03:22:13Z

fixing bad writing

Anaconda With Sword: /* Ingredients */

2018-09-07T17:33:23Z

‎Ingredients

Anaconda With Sword: /* Ingredients */

2018-09-07T17:32:07Z

‎Ingredients

Anaconda With Sword: /* Tools */

2018-09-07T17:31:41Z

‎Tools

Anaconda With Sword: /* Mark */

2018-07-30T15:19:18Z

‎Mark

Anaconda With Sword: /* Actia, the Singer-of-Sunlight */

2018-07-16T15:59:21Z

‎Actia, the Singer-of-Sunlight

Anaconda With Sword: /* Servants */

2018-07-16T15:55:37Z

‎Servants

Anaconda With Sword at 15:13, 16 July 2018

2018-07-16T15:13:31Z

Anaconda With Sword at 15:13, 16 July 2018

2018-07-16T15:13:22Z

Lyrositor: Text replacement - "$" to "Category:Fansus I"

2018-07-08T15:43:14Z

Text replacement - "$" to "Category:Fansus I"

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 | arrival = c. 960 C.E.
 | owners = [[User:Anaconda With Sword|Anaconda With Sword]]
-}}'''The Bright-Delver''' ('''That Which Remains''', '''The Sea-Singer''', '''The Foremost of Snakes''') is the Fourth Hour of the Fansus, created by [[User:Anaconda_With_Sword|Anaconda With Sword]]. She is a God-From-Blood, born of the horrible thing which happened to the Great Serpent in Nowhere. Her aspects are [[:Category:Knock|Knock]], [[:Category:Secret Histories|Secret Histories]], and [[:Category:Heart|Heart]], in decreasing order of importance. She wants everyone to be able to see everything that the Glory and the Occult has to offer, and remain unharmed from it. Like most Hours, she wants the world population to become worshippers. Unlike most Hours, she doesn’t care whether or not the population worships it; it just wants the Mansus to become lively.
+}}'''The Bright-Delver''' ('''That Which Remains''', '''The Sea-Singer''', '''The Foremost of Snakes''') is the Fourth Hour of the Fansus, created by [[User:Anaconda_With_Sword|Anaconda With Sword]]. She is a God-From-Blood, born of the horrible thing which happened to the Great Serpent in Nowhere. Her aspects are [[:Category:Knock|Knock]], [[:Category:Secret Histories|Secret Histories]], and [[:Category:Heart|Heart]], in decreasing order of importance. Her spheres are contentment, vitality, and socialization. There are rumors that the Bright-Delver and the Mendicant have some sort of arrangement, despite the latter Hour's banishment by the Anaconda.
-While followers of the Cuckoo might consider themselves virtuous people who help the poor and less virtuous become proper citizens, followers of the Bright-Delver are actually concerned with aiding others in a way that helps without sacrificing their happiness. Soup kitchens, free clinics, and other such charitable organizations are often the purview of cultists of the Bright-Delver. It’s not that they’re naive enough to assume that no one will cheat them, it’s that they believe that helping people is more important than punishing those who take advantage of them. In the Mansus proper, amongst the affairs of the Hours, those who take advantage of the Bright-Delver often have the Anaconda to answer to- a punishment which is never worth the crime.
+While followers of the Cuckoo might consider themselves virtuous people who help the poor and less virtuous become proper citizens, followers of the Bright-Delver are actually concerned with aiding others in a way that helps without sacrificing their happiness. Soup kitchens, free clinics, and other such charitable organizations are often the purview of cultists of the Bright-Delver. It’s not that they’re naive enough to assume that no one will cheat them, it’s that they believe that helping people is more important than punishing those who take advantage of them. It is said that in the affairs of the Hours, those who take advantage of the Bright-Delver often have the Anaconda to answer to- a punishment which is never worth the crime.
 Her tarot card is The Empress.

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 === Ingredients ===
-* '''Sweet Scale''' ({{Aspect|Knock|4}}, {{Aspect|Secret Histories|4}}): When the Bright-Singer makes merry, sometimes she loses a scale in the dance. This one is yours, now.
+* '''Sweet Scale''' ({{Aspect|Secret Histories|4}}): When the Bright-Singer makes merry, sometimes she loses a scale in the dance. This one is yours, now.
 * '''Happy Hymn''' ({{Aspect|Heart|8}}: You wrote this! Isn’t it wonderful? Sing, now, and let the world sing with you.

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 === Ingredients ===
 * '''Sweet Scale''' ({{Aspect|Knock|4}}, {{Aspect|Secret Histories|4}}): When the Bright-Singer makes merry, sometimes she loses a scale in the dance. This one is yours, now.
-* '''Happy Hymn''' ({{Aspect|Heart|8}}, {{Aspect|Secret Histories|8}}): You wrote this! Isn’t it wonderful? Sing, now, and let the world sing with you.
+* '''Happy Hymn''' ({{Aspect|Heart|8}}: You wrote this! Isn’t it wonderful? Sing, now, and let the world sing with you.
 ===Books===

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 == Items ==
 === Tools ===
-* '''Charming Castanets''' ({{Aspect|Knock|6}}, {{Aspect|Heart|12}}): Anyone can create a compelling rhythm with these. It’s hard to keep your feet from tapping along. But, the Bright-Singer has never needed feet to dance...
+* '''Charming Castanets''' ({{Aspect|Knock|4}}, {{Aspect|Heart|12}}): Anyone can create a compelling rhythm with these. It’s hard to keep your feet from tapping along. But, the Bright-Singer has never needed feet to dance...
 === Ingredients ===

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 # '''Ascension: Kindness''': Sleeplessness and vitality come with the Fifth Mark. I am followed by waking dreams, even as I soothe pains and bring comfort to those in need. Even when I close my eyes, I still see the world in all its color.
 # '''Ascension: Kindness''': The Sixth Mark embraces me, and I feel neither loneliness nor sorrow. My eyes are inhuman, slitted like a serpents and in an ever-changing pattern of colors. The children all recognize me as a protector, and even the most frightened does not fear me.
-# '''The Beat of Love's Drum:''': A crown sits upon my head, and my feet touch the glittering sands of the Aquarium. Silks and songs and joy follow in the wake of our parade, and even the cruelest denizens of this place leave us in peace. The Bright-Delver's shadow dances in the flickering light of the Glory, and soon she will lead us all to the tops of the waves to see it. Perhaps, one day, I will rise to meet it.
+# '''The Beat of Love's Drum''': A crown sits upon my head, and my feet touch the glittering sands of the Aquarium. Silks and songs and joy follow in the wake of our parade, and even the cruelest denizens of this place leave us in peace. The Bright-Delver's shadow dances in the flickering light of the Glory, and soon she will lead us all to the tops of the waves to see it. Perhaps, one day, I will rise to meet it.
 ==Servants==

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 ====Actia, the Singer-of-Sunlight====
-''"I refuse to let sorrow color the future"''<br />
+''"I refuse to let sorrow color the future."''<br />
 Aspects: {{Aspect|Lantern|12}}, {{Aspect|Heart|12}}; Deciever<br />
 Temptations: Unsummonable

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-===Servants===
+==Servants==
 * '''Coatl:''' Each feather glitters like a rainbow, and chimes like a silver bell. Let it wrap around your neck or waist, and it could be taken for a gaudy accessory.
 * '''Bookwyrm:''' Each Bookwyrm has an abundance of wings, and no two have the exact same amount or coloration. Despite that, you can never claim that any one is more aesthetically pleasing than another.
 * '''Librarian:''' They rifle through your books while idle, recategorizing and reshuffling them. On occasion, you find a new book and a letter on your desk advising you to read it.
-* '''Chanakaya, the Dancer-with-Swords:''' His sabres dance and shimmer, never quite at ease. Very often you find them carving an almost musical pattern in the air, as he smiles a wistful smile remembering better times, yet one resolute in knowing he did what he had to.
 == Locations ==

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 | origin = Blood
 | titles = The Bright-Delver<br />The Sea-Singer<br />That Which Remains<br />The Foremost of Snakes
-| names = Chanakaya, the Dancer-with-Swords<br />Actia, the Singer-of-Shadows
+| names = Chanakaya, the Dancer-with-Swords<br />Actia, the Singer-of-Sunlight
 | aspects = {{Aspect|Knock}} {{Aspect|Secret Histories}} {{Aspect|Heart}}
 | arrival = c. 960 C.E.

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 [[Category:Knock]]
 [[Category:Secret Histories]]
-[[Category:Heart]]
+[[Category:Heart]][[Category:Fansus I]]