The Boatman - Revision history

Blackwellmasked: /* Mark */

2020-03-31T22:21:14Z

‎Mark

Blackwellmasked: /* Mark */

2019-12-25T20:18:36Z

‎Mark

Blackwellmasked: /* Mark */

2019-11-16T02:00:52Z

‎Mark

Blackwellmasked: /* Cult */

2019-11-16T01:53:16Z

‎Cult

Blackwellmasked: /* Cult */

2019-11-16T01:52:45Z

‎Cult

Blackwellmasked: /* The Old Geezer */

2019-09-20T01:58:33Z

‎The Old Geezer

Blackwellmasked: /* The Old Geezer */

2019-09-20T01:57:07Z

‎The Old Geezer

Blackwellmasked at 01:56, 20 September 2019

2019-09-20T01:56:19Z

Blackwellmasked: /* Principles */

2019-09-16T22:56:54Z

‎Principles

Blackwellmasked: /* History */

2019-09-02T19:44:35Z

‎History

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 # '''Ascension: Humanity: my mind feels thin, rapid memories of the dearly departed flow through like the river beneath my feet, I have started to work under the boatman directly, it is tough work but rewarding.
 # '''Ascension: humanity: I worked myself to the bone taking tolls and giving rides, the water's of Lethe has removed who I once was... it no longer matters, all that matters is that humanity is served
-# '''Ending''': I talk to the boatman again after a long days work, about these thoughts and feelings that pierce my skull so deeply, he is pleased to here my progress and schedules a grand event for the city so they could witness me, that night after drinking and feasting I drowned myself in the river in front of a cheering crowd of my new masters. the last bit of me falling away as the blood of the dead gave me new shape, when I arise in the morning I am more than human. I am humanity and it’s perfect form, I shall never fall until the final winter.
+# '''Ending''': I talk to the boatman again after a long days work, about these thoughts and feelings that pierce my skull so deeply, he is pleased to hear my progress and schedules a grand event for the city so they could witness me, that night after drinking and feasting I drowned myself in the river in front of a cheering crowd of my new masters. the last bit of me falling away as the blood of the dead gave me new shape, when I arise in the morning I am more than human. I am humanity and it’s perfect form, I shall never fall until the final winter.
 ===Servants===

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 # '''Dedication: Progress: I understand that we must move forward and have begun to understand how we may begin.
 # '''Ascension: Humanity: I have spoken to the boatman again, all of us who dwell into the city have spoken to them once, he sees potential.
-# '''Ascension: Humanity : I remember stories of the old city in  and how the river was made, it flows in my veins more detail then i was ever given
+# '''Ascension: Humanity : I remember stories of the old city in  and how the river was made, it flows in my veins with more detail then i was ever given
 # '''Ascension: Humanity: my mind feels thin, rapid memories of the dearly departed flow through like the river beneath my feet, I have started to work under the boatman directly, it is tough work but rewarding.
-# '''Ascension: humanity four: I worked myself to the bone taking tolls and giving rides, the water's of Lethe has removed who I once was... it no longer matters all that matters is that humanity is served
+# '''Ascension: humanity: I worked myself to the bone taking tolls and giving rides, the water's of Lethe has removed who I once was... it no longer matters, all that matters is that humanity is served
-# '''Ending''': I talk to the boatman again after a long days work, about these thoughts and feelings that pierce my skull so deeply, he is pleased to here my prgress and schedules a grand event for the city so they could witness me, that night after drinking and feasting I drowned myself in the river in front of a cheering crowd of my new masters. the last bit of me falling away as the blood of the dead gave me new shape, when I arise in the morning I am more than human. I am humanity and it’s perfect form, I shall never fall until the final winter.
+# '''Ending''': I talk to the boatman again after a long days work, about these thoughts and feelings that pierce my skull so deeply, he is pleased to here my progress and schedules a grand event for the city so they could witness me, that night after drinking and feasting I drowned myself in the river in front of a cheering crowd of my new masters. the last bit of me falling away as the blood of the dead gave me new shape, when I arise in the morning I am more than human. I am humanity and it’s perfect form, I shall never fall until the final winter.
 ===Servants===

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 ===Mark===
-# '''Temptation: Phrase:
+# '''Temptation: Progress: I feel as though we can move forward, but who is we:
-# '''Dedication: Phrase:.
+# '''Dedication: Progress: I understand that we must move forward and have begun to understand how we may begin.
-# '''Ascension: Phrase:
+# '''Ascension: Humanity: I have spoken to the boatman again, all of us who dwell into the city have spoken to them once, he sees potential.
-# '''Ascension: Phrase:
+# '''Ascension: Humanity : I remember stories of the old city in  and how the river was made, it flows in my veins more detail then i was ever given
-# '''Ascension: Phrase:
+# '''Ascension: Humanity: my mind feels thin, rapid memories of the dearly departed flow through like the river beneath my feet, I have started to work under the boatman directly, it is tough work but rewarding.
-# '''Ascension: Phrase:
+# '''Ascension: humanity four: I worked myself to the bone taking tolls and giving rides, the water's of Lethe has removed who I once was... it no longer matters all that matters is that humanity is served
-# '''Ending''': I
+# '''Ending''': I talk to the boatman again after a long days work, about these thoughts and feelings that pierce my skull so deeply, he is pleased to here my prgress and schedules a grand event for the city so they could witness me, that night after drinking and feasting I drowned myself in the river in front of a cheering crowd of my new masters. the last bit of me falling away as the blood of the dead gave me new shape, when I arise in the morning I am more than human. I am humanity and it’s perfect form, I shall never fall until the final winter.
 ===Servants===
 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription

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 ===Cult===
 The boatman is worshiped by mortals for fair deals and passage. He cares not for their pleas. however he is known to except some mortals with potential to become long servants of humanity
 ===Mark===

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 ==Worship==
 ===Cult===
-The boatman is worshiped by mortals for fair deals and passage. He cares not for their pleas, however.
+The boatman is worshiped by mortals for fair deals and passage. He cares not for their pleas. however he is known to except some mortals with potential to become long servants of humanity
 ===Mark===

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 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription
 |image       = File:TheOldGeezer.png
-|title       = The task master
+|title       = The Task Master
 |description = '"This will keep costing you to keep me at the top of the list, but a fair price it is"'
 |aspect0     = Follower

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 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription
 |image       = File:TheOldGeezer.png
-|title       = The Old Geezer
+|title       = The task master
 |description = '"This will keep costing you to keep me at the top of the list, but a fair price it is"'
 |aspect0     = Follower
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 |title             = Summon a valued name of The Boatman
 |start_description = one of the few who made it out of the river with his mind in check, now he does what need to be done, for the good of mankind.
-|description       =  the contract is signed and the tasks are decided, now we must call him forward
+|description       =  the contract is signed and the tasks are decided,he awaits only the word to move
 |aspect0           = Ritual
 |aspect1           = Knock

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 |image       = File:TheOldGeezer.png
 |title       = The Old Geezer
-|description = '"Get off my lawn!"'
+|description = '"This will keep costing you to keep me at the top of the list, but a fair price it is"'
 |aspect0     = Follower
 |aspect1     = Summoned
-|aspect2     = Tutor
+|aspect2     = Hireling
-|aspect3     = Devourer
+|aspect3     = Winter
 |quantity3   = 12
 |aspect4     = Edge
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 |aspect5     = Heart
 |quantity5   = 12
-|fansus      = 0
+|fansus      = 5
 }}</div>
 <div style="margin-top: 20px; text-align: center">{{RecipeDescription
 |verb              = Work
-|title             = Summon one of the Name-emanations of the Template
+|title             = Summon a valued name of The Boatman
-|start_description = The Old Man of the Template is coming. The fat old fellow can't bare to even look at you. Every hair on his body rises at the mention of lawns.
+|start_description = one of the few who made it out of the river with his mind in check, now he does what need to be done, for the good of mankind.
-|description       =  Is this truly the best the Template has to offer?
+|description       =  the contract is signed and the tasks are decided, now we must call him forward
 |aspect0           = Ritual
 |aspect1           = Knock
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 |aspect2           = Heart
 |quantity2         = 10
-|aspect3           = Lantern
+|aspect3           = winter
-|quantity3         = 2
+|quantity3         = 5
-|fansus            = 2
+|fansus            = 5
 }}</div>

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 A large figure shrouded in a red cloak and donning a dark mask. The mask has smiling face - none have seen his face for a long time. His limbs are blood-red.
 ===Principles===
-He is a guide and gatekeeper, thus he is knock. He is the shepherd of the dead, and slayer of those who do not pay the toll - thus he is winter. He is a sadist and enjoys his profession greatly, thus he is edge.
+He is a guide and gatekeeper, thus he is knock. He is the shepherd of the dead, and slayer of those who do not pay the toll of sentimentality - thus he is winter. He is a sadist and enjoys his profession greatly, thus he is edge.
 ==Worship==

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 The Boatman is a peculiar Hour. A gatekeeper - he is the way into the City. The only way in, in fact. He dictates who enters and who will feed the river. That is his task.
 ===History===
-Far before the days of the lock-down, he was there, guarding the gates. He is far more than a mere ferryman. Once a mortal who was considered a murderer by those who stumbled upon his secrets, hidden in the boathouse. His journey to Hourhood was torturous, at first for his accusers, and afterwards for himself after he became a long; his master held the gates as he would bleed like a pig until he became the very blood that he would shed. Once he fully ascended, he found that the blood would simply not stop pouring, so the Boatman created a moat from it to further aid his duties. Aside from this, the Boatman's sight also greatly improved with ascension. These boons only made him gain a greater fervor for his task and purpose than ever before.
+the boatman's past as a mortal are kept hidden by him so most of this is rumor and tale. he was born a decedent of the fire keeper, his blood thicker with him then most. most never saw him as human, a monster in his actions. he hid it well for most of his mortal life working as a boatman in Venice, the rivers would run red during his time as a gondolier, in the abandoned water ways. when the breach began he was one of the first  to help bulid the city, an old voice in his head told him to, he obeyed. finally when they where done the wild gods appeared, they drowned him in blood, of friends workers, and his home. he struggled for a long time, until he let the rivers of blood take. it gave him a mission, to make sure this would happen to no one else. he arose a new thing, The boatman as we know him, he found the other who where interested and and able and rebuilt the city, doing his duty until the world grows to its final winter and all board the boat.
 ===Appearance===