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 The Hour called Our Lady of Scars is not as she was, before the Collision. She has been scarred and reduced by the sacrifice she made, to save the Hours and the twin Mansi. She fully expected to die, but she lived. She does not regret what she did, nor what she didn't.
-Now, she is the patron of the wounded, the scarred, and the mutilated, invoked in moments of weakness and futility. She does not grant strength, not as her father does, though she wishes she could. She grants determination, resolve, the power to persist another day and another day and another day. She also grants the wisdom to know when strength and resolve are futile, when it is better to flee or to cease.
+Now, she is the patron of the wounded, the scarred, and the mutilated, invoked in moments of weakness and futility. She does not grant strength, not as her father does, though she wishes she could. She grants determination, resolve, the power to persist another day and another day and another day. She also grants the wisdom to know when strength and resolve are futile, when it is better to flee or to cease. And perhaps most importantly, she grants oracles, as something to give for those with nothing else to give. She is often invoked for protection, not so that all goes well, but in case all goes wrong. She is sometimes invoked at sickbeds, when it is known that the patient has no chance of recovery.
 == History ==
 == Apocalypse ==
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 == Appearance ==
-Her Scarred Serenity primarily appears as an elderly woman, scarred, blindfolded, and clothed in rags. She sits on the cold stone slab intended to be her tomb, attended by servants and kept live through strong magic. She may also appear as a large black bird, blindfolded and incapable of flight.
+Her Scarred Serenity primarily appears as an elderly woman, scarred, blindfolded, and clothed in rags. She sits on the cold stone slab where she was embalmed, attended by servants and kept alive through strong magic. She may also appear as a large black bird, blindfolded and incapable of flight.
 == Principles ==
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 == Locations ==
-=== The Fansus ===
+=== The Mansus ===
 === The Histories ===

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 === Tools ===
-'''Stigmata {{Aspect|Knock}} 12:''' ''There are wounds too deep for even Her Scarred Serenity to heal, ones she splits into pieces and gives to her followers to bear. ''
+'''Stigmata {{Aspect|Knock}} 12:''' ''There are wounds too deep for even Her Scarred Serenity to close, ones she splits into pieces and gives to her followers to bear. ''
 '''As a gift:''' ''It cannot be healed, only given further. Keep it somewhere where the bleeding won't get in the way''
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 === Ingredients ===
-'''Indissoluble Ink: {{Aspect|Heart}} 4, Pigment''' ''For words and illustrations alike, this should ensue that the texts never cease to be read''
+'''Indissoluble Ink: {{Aspect|Heart}} 4, Pigment''' ''The paper may crumble. The walls may crack. The canvas may be stained. The words, and the murals, and the paintings will remain long after that, lingering like memories.''
-'''Tattered Feathers: {{Aspect|Heart}} 12:'''
+'''Tattered Feathers: {{Aspect|Winter}} 12:'''
 === Influences ===

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 | quote   = Unlike what my father may tell you, there may in fact be prices too great
 | origin  = Light
-| titles  = Our Lady of Scars
+| titles  = Our Lady of Scars, The Scarred Maiden
 | names   = Ryo, the Last Augur
 | aspects = {{Aspect|Heart}} {{Aspect|Winter}} {{Aspect|Knock}}
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 '''Yields: Scholar: Vak'''
 == Relationships ==

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 | origin  = Light
 | titles  = Our Lady of Scars
-| names   = Her Last Scholar
+| names   = Ryo, the Last Augur
 | aspects = {{Aspect|Heart}} {{Aspect|Winter}} {{Aspect|Knock}}
 | arrival = Long before the Collision.
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 The Hour called Our Lady of Scars is not as she was, before the Collision. She has been scarred and reduced by the sacrifice she made, to save the Hours and the twin Mansi. She fully expected to die, but she lived. She does not regret what she did, nor what she didn't.
 Now, she is the patron of the wounded, the scarred, and the mutilated, invoked in moments of weakness and futility. She does not grant strength, not as her father does, though she wishes she could. She grants determination, resolve, the power to persist another day and another day and another day. She also grants the wisdom to know when strength and resolve are futile, when it is better to flee or to cease.
 == History ==
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 === Servants ===
-Rao, The Last Scholar
+Rao, The Last Augur
 === Servants ===
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 '''After Translation:''' ''A series of warnings, meditative exercises, and protective rites one needs to preform to safely read a "Word of Words", which Atzak claims is important to understand "The grandmother of languages".''
-'''Before reading:''' ''"The Glory is dead. The goddess Vak is dead. Our Lady is dead. But yet, she will protect the Monastery from the Deluge, as she protects the body from the wound during surgery, as she protects the soul from evil during Mansus-dreams, and as she will protect the mind from the Word I will record. Here are the rites of protection..."''
+'''Before reading:''' ''"The Glory is dead. The goddess Vak is dead. Our Lady is close to death. But yet, she will protect the Monastery from the Deluge, as she protects the body from the wound during surgery, as she protects the soul from evil during Mansus-dreams, and as she will protect the mind from the Word I will record. Here are the rites of protection..."''
 '''After reading:''' ''"Many words can protect, but this one needs to be protected against. Few corpses contain words, but this word contains a corpse. All languages contain words, but this word contains a language. Herein, the grave of threefold Vak, the goddess, the word, and the language."  ''

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	=== Ingredients ===		=== Ingredients ===

		+	'''Indissoluble Ink: {{Aspect\|Heart}} 4, Pigment''' ''For words and illustrations alike, this should ensue that the texts never cease to be read''

		+	'''Tattered Feathers: {{Aspect\|Heart}} 12:'''

	=== Influences ===		=== Influences ===

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 === The Histories ===
-''The Summit Monastery:''
+'''The Summit Monastery:'''
 == Items ==
 === Tools ===
-''Stigmata {{Aspect|Knock}} 12:'' 'There are wounds too deep for even Her Scarred Serenity to heal, ones she splits into pieces and gives to her followers to bear. '
+'''Stigmata {{Aspect|Knock}} 12:'' ''There are wounds too deep for even Her Scarred Serenity to heal, ones she splits into pieces and gives to her followers to bear. ''
-''As a gift:'' 'It cannot be healed, only given further. Keep it somewhere where the bleeding won't get in the way'
+'''As a gift:''' ''It cannot be healed, only given further. Keep it somewhere where the bleeding won't get in the way''
-Immaculate Corpse {{Aspect|Heart}} 12::
+'''Immaculate Corpse {{Aspect|Heart}} 12:'''
 === Ingredients ===
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 === Books ===
-''Accounts from the Deluge: The Predictions We Made''
+'''Accounts from the Deluge: The Predictions We Made''' ''The first of three enigmatic scrapbooks by "Straggler"''
-''Before reading:'' 'A combined scrapbook and travelogue by the enigmatic "Straggler". The first volume, written before the Deluge, gathers a haphazard variety of seemingly meaningless and unconnected texts, including receipts, notes, and shopping lists.'
+'''Before reading:''' ''A combined scrapbook and travelogue by the enigmatic "Straggler". The first volume, written before the Deluge, gathers a haphazard variety of seemingly meaningless and unconnected texts, including receipts, notes, and shopping lists.''
-''After reading:'' 'As one progresses through the gathered nonsense, first patterns and then prophecies slowly begin to emerge as Straggler's intent becomes clear. There is no doubt Straggler was an occultist, there is no doubt they knew about Deluge before it happened, and there is no doubt they tried to warn others through this book.'
+'''After reading:''' ''As one progresses through the gathered nonsense, first patterns and then prophecies slowly begin to emerge as Straggler's intent becomes clear. There is no doubt Straggler was an occultist, there is no doubt they knew about Deluge before it happened, and there is no doubt they tried to warn others through this book.''
-''Yields: {{Aspect|Lantern}} 2, Dread''
+'''Yields: {{Aspect|Lantern}} 2, Dread'''
-''Accounts from the Deluge: The Precautions We Took'' 'The second of three enigmatic scrapbooks by "Straggler"
+'''Accounts from the Deluge: The Precautions We Took''' ''The second of three enigmatic scrapbooks by "Straggler"''
-''Before reading:'' 'A combined scrapbook and travelogue by the enigmatic "Straggler". The second volume, written during the Deluge, gathers a wide variety of seemingly unconnected means people used to protect themselves against the Deluge, including routines, superstitions, and aphorisms.'
+'''Before reading:''' ''A combined scrapbook and travelogue by the enigmatic "Straggler". The second volume, written during the Deluge, gathers a wide variety of seemingly unconnected means people used to protect themselves against the Deluge, including routines, superstitions, and aphorisms.''
-''After reading:'' 'As one progresses through the gathered rabble, first patterns and then rituals slowly begin to emerge as Straggler's intent becomes clear. There is no doubt Straggler knew how to protect themselves, there is no doubt they tried to save others, and there is no doubt they, at least to some degree, failed.'
+'''After reading:''' ''As one progresses through the gathered rabble, first patterns and then rituals slowly begin to emerge as Straggler's intent becomes clear. There is no doubt Straggler knew how to protect themselves, there is no doubt they tried to save others, and there is no doubt they, at least to some degree, failed.''
-''Yields: {{Aspect|Heart}} 4, Dread''
+'''Yields: {{Aspect|Heart}} 4, Dread'''
-''Accounts from the Deluge: The Losses We Endured'' 'The third of three enigmatic scrapbooks by "Straggler"
+'''Accounts from the Deluge: The Losses We Endured''' ''The third of three enigmatic scrapbooks by "Straggler"''
-'A combined scrapbook and travelogue by the enigmatic "Straggler". The third volume, written shortly after the Deluge, gathers a wide variety of seemingly unconnected ways people mourned those they lost, including funerary speeches, tombstone inscriptions, and poems.'
+''A combined scrapbook and travelogue by the enigmatic "Straggler". The third volume, written shortly after the Deluge, gathers a wide variety of seemingly unconnected ways people mourned those they lost, including funerary speeches, tombstone inscriptions, and poems.''
-''After reading:'' 'As one progresses through the gathered mourning, first patterns and then laments slowly begin to emerge as Straggler's intent becomes clear. There is no doubt Straggler mourned Her Scarred Serenity, there is no doubt they knew they were dying as well, and there is no doubt they wrote the book as penance for their failures, in an attempt to enter the service of that scarred Hour.'
+'''After reading:''' ''As one progresses through the gathered mourning, first patterns and then laments slowly begin to emerge as Straggler's intent becomes clear. There is no doubt Straggler mourned Her Scarred Serenity, there is no doubt they knew they were dying as well, and there is no doubt they wrote the book as penance for their failures, in an attempt to enter the service of that scarred Hour.''
-''Yields: {{Aspect|Winter}} 6, Dread''
+'''Yields: {{Aspect|Winter}} 6, Dread'''
-''The Last-Word Tantra:''
+'''The Last-Word Tantra:'''
-''Before Translation:'' 'Enigmatic musings by the deaf monk Atzak concerning a single word once spoken to him by his mentor, in Sanskrit.'
+'''Before Translation:''' ''Enigmatic musings by the deaf monk Atzak concerning a single word once spoken to him by his mentor, in Sanskrit.'
-''After Translation:'' 'A series of warnings, meditative exercises, and protective rites one needs to preform to safely read a "Word of Words", which Atzak claims is important to understand "The grandmother of languages".'
+'''After Translation:''' ''A series of warnings, meditative exercises, and protective rites one needs to preform to safely read a "Word of Words", which Atzak claims is important to understand "The grandmother of languages".''
-''Before reading:'' '"The Glory is dead. The goddess Vak is dead. Our Lady is dead. But yet, she will protect the Monastery from the Deluge, as she protects the body from the wound during surgery, as she protects the soul from evil during Mansus-dreams, and as she will protect the mind from the Word I will record. Here are the rites of protection..."'
+'''Before reading:''' ''"The Glory is dead. The goddess Vak is dead. Our Lady is dead. But yet, she will protect the Monastery from the Deluge, as she protects the body from the wound during surgery, as she protects the soul from evil during Mansus-dreams, and as she will protect the mind from the Word I will record. Here are the rites of protection..."''
-''After reading:'' '"Many words can protect, but this one needs to be protected against. Few corpses contain words, but this word contains a corpse. All languages contain words, but this word contains a language. Herein, the grave of threefold Vak, the goddess, the word, and the language."  '
+'''After reading:''' ''"Many words can protect, but this one needs to be protected against. Few corpses contain words, but this word contains a corpse. All languages contain words, but this word contains a language. Herein, the grave of threefold Vak, the goddess, the word, and the language."  ''
-''Yields: Scholar: Vak''
+'''Yields: Scholar: Vak'''
 == Relationships ==

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 | title   = Her Scarred Serenity
 | card    =
-| quote   = "Unlike what my father may tell you, there may in fact be prices too great
+| quote   = Unlike what my father may tell you, there may in fact be prices too great
 | origin  = Light
 | titles  = Our Lady of Scars