Followers (Vol. II) - Revision history

Cospinol: /* Acton (Cospinol) */

2019-08-06T23:06:02Z

‎Acton (Cospinol)

Cospinol: /* Acton (Cospinol) */

2019-06-25T17:43:10Z

‎Acton (Cospinol)

Leathy Kocktail: /* Dubedat (Leathy Kocktail) */

2019-06-25T07:31:31Z

‎Dubedat (Leathy Kocktail)

Leathy Kocktail: /* Dubedat (Leathy Kocktail) */

2019-06-25T07:23:58Z

‎Dubedat (Leathy Kocktail)

Leathy Kocktail: /* Lantern */

2019-06-25T07:21:06Z

‎Lantern

Lyrositor: Added Lucas

2019-06-20T10:13:29Z

Added Lucas

A Blessed Feline: Added Alex

2019-02-26T09:54:26Z

Added Alex

A Blessed Feline at 21:59, 3 February 2019

2019-02-03T21:59:30Z

Evoro, Paints-in-Blood: /* Bryn (Evoro) */

2018-12-05T15:05:32Z

‎Bryn (Evoro)

Evoro, Paints-in-Blood: /* Unnamed Knock Person (Evoro) */

2018-12-05T15:03:13Z

‎Unnamed Knock Person (Evoro)

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 | '''Disciple'''     ||  Acton speaks plainly of his body, but orates with measure his new beliefs on a pyre soul.
 |-
-| '''Exalt'''       ||  Acton knows his pyre, the world strains greedily to the same.
+| '''Exalt'''       ||  Acton knows his pyre, metal and man strains greedily to the same.
 |-
-| '''Troublemaker''' ||  Acton's plans are veins of lava beneath a bubbling inferno. Smoke billows our sight.
+| '''Troublemaker''' ||  Acton's plans are veins of lava beneath a bubbling inferno. Smoke billows in our sight.
 |-
 | '''Prisoner'''     ||  Acton is not to see men speak, only to hear their voices. No more will his rages replace men.

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 | '''Disciple'''     ||  Acton speaks plainly of his body, but orates with measure his new beliefs on a pyre soul.
 |-
-| '''Ophede'''       ||  Acton knows his mind, the world strains greedily to the same.
+| '''Exalt'''       ||  Acton knows his pyre, the world strains greedily to the same.
 |-
-| '''Troublemaker''' ||  Acton's plans move like veins of lava beneath a bubbling inferno we have yet found.
+| '''Troublemaker''' ||  Acton's plans are veins of lava beneath a bubbling inferno. Smoke billows our sight.
 |-
 | '''Prisoner'''     ||  Acton is not to see men speak, only to hear their voices. No more will his rages replace men.

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-=== Dubedat (Leathy Kocktail) ===
+=== Arthur (Leathy Kocktail) ===
 </br>
 '''Acquaintance''' - His humour often get laughs from his audiences, but rarely comes from those he comments upon. </br>

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 === Dubedat (Leathy Kocktail) ===
-'''Acquaintance''' - </br> His humour often get laughs from his audiences, but rarely comes from those he comments upon.
+</br>
-'''Follower''' - </br> He always jests at the other's expense, but his insights are rarely wrong. He tries to make me laugh.
+'''Acquaintance''' - His humour often get laughs from his audiences, but rarely comes from those he comments upon. </br>
-'''Disciple''' - </br> He makes light of dark matters, even when I ask him not to, even when it would be merciful to refrain.
+'''Follower''' - He always jests at the others' expense, but his insights are rarely wrong. He tries to make me laugh.</br>
-'''Vocabulate''' - </br> His laugh is bright, his speech is harsh. He has learned that the right word in the right place can send a person to their knees. Another can dazzle and bewitch. Another can burn like the sun.
+'''Disciple''' - He makes light of dark matters, even when I ask him not to, even when it would be merciful to refrain. </br>
-'''Prisoner''' - </br> Even behind bars, he jokes about the things I plan to do to him. 'Am I right?' he asks. He always is.
+'''Vocabulate''' -  His laugh is bright, his speech is harsh. He has learned that the right word in the right place can send a person to their knees. Another can dazzle and bewitch. Another can burn like the sun.</br>
-'''Troublemaker''' - </br> This comedian fancies me the butt of all his harsh jokes. He always says that I've yet to taste the punchline.
+'''Prisoner''' - Even behind bars and tied up, he jokes and hypothesizes about the things I plan to do to him. 'Am I right?' he asks. He always is. I will need a gag as well. </br>
 == Edge ==

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 | '''Prisoner'''     || "So this is how it ends?" He asks you when the jail call slams shut. "Is that all I am to you, another insignificant pawn in another one of your little games?"
 |}
 == Edge ==

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	== Edge ==		== Edge ==
		+
		+	=== Lucas ([[User:Lyrositor\|Lyrositor]]) ===
		+	{\|
		+	\| '''Acquaintance''' \|\| Lucas operates on his patients with formidable enthusiasm.
		+	\|-
		+	\| '''Believer''' \|\| Lucas would much rather be saving lives than ending them, but those worth saving are in short supply these days.
		+	\|-
		+	\| '''Disciple''' \|\| Lucas still dons his surgeon's scrubs when he knows the work will be untidy.
		+	\|-
		+	\| '''Sabre''' \|\| Lucas dispatches problems with professional economy of effort. No knife is ever used twice without proper sterilization.
		+	\|-
		+	\| '''Troublemaker''' \|\| Lucas is said to be the best in his field. Certainly none of his patients have died under his knife, but one suspects his true work is not performed before an operating theatre.
		+	\|-
		+	\| '''Prisoner''' \|\| Lucas has taken to describing the myriad methods through which he will have his revenge on us. Some of the imagery does not make for comfortable sleep.
		+	\|}

	=== Name (Owner) ===		=== Name (Owner) ===

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 '''Heretic''' - Antoine speaks of stars like another might talk about their lovers. What secrets do they whisper to him?</br>
 '''Prisoner''' - Antoine watches the play of shadows on the wall. He maintains he has always been trapped like this.</br>
 == Edge ==

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 '''Seeker''' - John is close now. Some days he is here, others he is across the seas, or over the mountains and the neverending desert wastes. </br>
 '''Prisoner''' - John endlessly paces in the confines of his cell. </br>
 === Name (Owner) ===

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 | '''Believer'''     || They are thin and malnourished; some swear Bryn has even grown a few inches taller from their time beneath the earth.
 |-
-| '''Disciple'''     || "I am digging," they explain, "to reach the Glory in the centre of the earth. But I suppose I can dig a few extra for you."
+| '''Disciple'''     || "I am digging," they explain, "to reach the Glory in the centre of the earth. But I suppose I can dig a few extra tunnels for you."
 |-
 | '''Burrower'''     || With but shovel and pick, Bryn has crafted tunnels that span as far as the eye can see in the squalid darkness, and further still.