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‎Books

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‎The King in the Woods

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‎The King in the Woods

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‎Names

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 |start_description = The dream diary recounts the mysterious garden in the Woods, and an encounter with a cold and terrible king.
-|description       = 'I kill and I kill and I kill, but the harder I fight, the Well hungers. I too, am at an end.'
+|description       = 'I kill and I kill and I kill, but the harder I fight, the more the Well hungers. I too, am at an end.'
 |fansus            = 4

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 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription
 |image       =
-|title       = Walk in the Garden
+|title       = Walk in the Garden Vol. 3
 |description = A dream diary of one M_______ and her encounter with the Gardener.
 |fansus      = 4
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 <div style="margin-top: 20px; text-align: center">{{RecipeDescription
 |verb              = Study
-|title             = Study the First War
+|title             = Study the Walk in the Garden Vol.3
 |start_description = The dream diary recounts all the ways to avoid the creatures of the garden to reach the well, where in its deepest pits, one may be able to listen to the Deep itself: <br>
 'My friend, my friend. Welcome. Strip off your armor. Drop your sword. This is a place of peace, of quiet, of life.'
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 ->Edge 8 Lore.
 ===Rites===

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 |verb              = Work
 |title             = Summon the King in the Woods, a Name of the Gardener
-|start_description = The King in the Woods remembers the hunts and the sacrifice. He feels the hunger in his soul and the whispers of the Well. He will only answer when invoked in hunger.
+|start_description = The King in the Woods remembers the hunts and the sacrifices he has made. He feels the hunger in his soul and the whispers of the Well. He will only answer when invoked in hunger.
 |description       = He appears, cold and terrible. We ensure that our protections are secure, as the King does not care who he takes to the Garden--only that somebody is taken.
 |aspect0           = ritual

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 <div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 10px;">{{ElementDescription
 |image       = File:Stolentemplate
-|title       = The Coal-Stained
+|title       = King in the Woods
 |description = "The Well hungers. Give me a quarry so that I may begin my hunt."
 |aspect0     = Follower

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 ===Servants===
 ====Names====
 ==Locations==
 ===The Mansus===

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 |start_description = The dream diary recounts all the ways to avoid the creatures of the garden to reach the well, where in its deepest pits, one may be able to listen to the Deep itself: <br>
 'My friend, my friend. Welcome. Strip off your armor. Drop your sword. This is a place of peace, of quiet, of life.'
-|description       = 'Oh my friend, how can we explain it to them? That the world is not built on laws, but rather, on mutual interest. Not on peace, but by victory. The universe is run by extermination, on thousand tiered gardens stamped into the ground by conquering armies. How can we explain that if anything is to survive to the end of days, it must live not on a smile, but by the sword. Not in a soft, warm place, but in cold hell of that one beautiful self-verifying truth: Existence at any cost.
+|description       = 'Oh my friend, how can we explain it to them? That the world is not built on laws, but rather, on mutual interest. Not on peace, but upon victory at any price. And if anything is to survive the end of days, it must live by that beautiful self-verifying truth: Existence.
 The fate of everything is made like this. In the collision.'

← Older revision		Revision as of 16:15, 17 July 2019
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	->Edge 6 Lore.		->Edge 6 Lore.
		+
		+	<div style="text-align: center; margin-bottom: 20px;">{{ElementDescription
		+	\|image =
		+	\|title = Walk in the Garden
		+	\|description = A dream diary of one M_______ and her encounter with the Gardener.
		+	\|fansus = 4
		+	}}</div>
		+
		+	<div style="margin-top: 20px; text-align: center">{{RecipeDescription
		+	\|verb = Study
		+	\|title = Study the First War
		+	\|start_description = The dream diary recounts all the ways to avoid the creatures of the garden to reach the well, where in its deepest pits, one may be able to listen to the Deep itself: <br>
		+	'My friend, my friend. Welcome. Strip off your armor. Drop your sword. This is a place of peace, of quiet, of life.'
		+	\|description = 'Oh my friend, how can we explain it to them? That the world is not built on laws, but rather, on temporary alliances and mutual interests. Not on peace, but by victory. The universe is run by extinction, on extermination. On thousand tiered gardens stamped into the ground by conquering armies. On creatures in the woods devouring wailing infants. That if anything is to survive to the end of days, it must live not on a smile, but by the sword. Not in a soft, warm place, but in cold hell of that one beautiful self-verifying truth: Existence at any cost.
		+
		+	The fate of everything is made like this. In the collision.'
		+	\|fansus = 4
		+	}}</div>
		+
		+	->Edge 8 Lore.

	===Rites===		===Rites===

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 |image       =
 |title       = The First War
-|description = A recent transcript of an interrogation on a high ranking member of the Order of the Egg, Undivided
+|description = A recent transcript of an interrogation on a high ranking member of the Order of the Egg, Divided
 |fansus      = 4
 }}</div>

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 |description       = <br>'It's so simple. Elegant like a knife point. It explains - this is not hyperbole, this is the farthest thing from exaggeration - EVERYTHING. Why do we exist? Why do we have atoms?
-It is simple. Because atomic matter is more stable than what preceded it. That was the first war, and this war is love.'
+It is simple. Because atomic matter is more stable than what preceded it. That was the first war, and this war was love.'
 |fansus            = 4
 }}</div>